New songs...feedback is good

Hey all,
Those of you who know me...know that it's a huge step for me to say that I am beginning to explore my music again. So....I'm beginning to explore my music again. I've written some songs in the past few weeks. Please browse through. I realize that you won't get the full effect without my amazing pipes backin' it up; nonetheless, give me some opinions. Thanks.

Keeps

I might be mistaken, but I think
I just lost myself
Or perhaps I am just taken,
with you

Baby don't worry
I'm in no hurry

But, if you kiss me like that again
If you kiss me like that again
If you kiss me like that again

Baby I'm yours
Baby I'm yours
For keeps

I must confess, I ain't no
porcelain doll
Don't wear no dress, don't really
dress at all

But all that I am
I'm yours to have

If you kiss me like that again
If you kiss me like that again
If you kiss me like that again

Baby I'm yours
Baby I'm yours
For keeps

(It's a work in progress) - still want to add some stuff.....like a bridge

Darlin' Darlene

Scrawny lil' girl with her bare-toed feet
Worn out dress, she tried to keep neat
She was full of hurt inside, but nobody could see
Darlin' Darlene

Darlin' Darlene
Come & sit next to me
and tell me how you came to be
Darlin' Darlene

She grew up tall and beautiful
She got away from her daddy when she left for school
She met a boy and he loved her good
Loved his woman like a man should

Darlin' Darlene
Come & sit next to me
and tell me how you came to be
Darlin' Darlene

(That's all I got, but I'm working on more)